Freestyle Friday: In Memory of Derrion Albert




THE FOLLOWING IS THE ENTIRE THREAD AS CAPTURED ON THE WALL OF CHRISTOPHER FANT ON OCTOBER 1 AND 2, 2009. If you are unfamiliar with Derrion Albert, he was a High School Junior that was killed by fellow students that was described as a Melee. His murder was caught on tape by an on-looker.


Poetry is suppose to move and inspire. So all the comments, thoughts, feelings, and poetic contributions were all heart-felt to me and worthy of saving for memorial sake, and are being reposted today, April 6, 2011.

Contributors (and Thanks) to this post go to Monica Morris, Magniff, Keisha 'Kitten' Isaacs, Sean Black, and Alexis Horton.

 

Monica Morris

Derrion I hope and pray your death was not in vain. You alone represent the war on the home front. How could they, why would they, you look just like my son and millions of others INNOCENT bystanders trying to make it. It is hard enough being a man added, being black and a successful student. I hope eventually the men and women of this generation … Read Morewill realize it is up to us to guide the next generation. Without guidance how can any of you be ecpected to lead. NO the loss of your precious life was not in vain God loves you and so do I. I never knew you but mu heart and prayers go out to you and your family, much love to you
October 1 at 6:22pm · Delete
 

iQ

That's what I'm talkin about…be sure to put this on the Freestyle Friday tomorrow…I have to repost this status so folks see tomorrow…
October 1 at 6:34pm · Delete
 

Monica Morris

I will repost it I felt like that since I heard that story we need to want more for our kids..and they need not to be scared to go to school fa real..I digress I might get on my soapbox…not tonight.
October 1 at 6:37pm · Delete
 

Keisha 'Kitten' Isaacs

Life has it's ups and downs… but when it's all said…life don't deserve to get beat to the ground…we look around and see the youth…killing each other up….where the truth…apparently it aint being taught….in school…better yet at home…cause that's where it all starts…some things wrong…with the big picture…instead of shaking hands for peace…they quick to hit ya….no knowledge being spread…while I'll babies lie bloody and dead!
October 2 at 11:22am · Delete
 

iQ

Rest-And-Peace (RAP)..I got this.

I can believe it happened again/
another innocent life lost/
to the same guilty system/… Read More
President O-B we crying inside/
and relying on you to make a difference/
and give us Free/
Amistad took a better route than most des kids/
skippin school/
smashin cars and bottles on blood stained concrete.

Murder rate – birth rate – Gas rate all up/
Blood Pressure high/
Eyes dipped in red dye/
aint even getting the news in the RedEye.

Leave it up to me/
there'll be a mass exodus of any heart beatin'/
in the streets past 3.

Gas rate – Crime rate – sex rates all up/
trust the system lies/
in the face of parent's cries/

I look in my child eyes/
and pray he lives passed me/
because burying anyone of my kids/
are tears that I wish not even my mirror to see/

R-I-P to every kid lost in the struggle/
and R-I-P to every adult with a mouth with a muzzle/
and R-I-P to every parent that had to set their kid free/
and R-I-P to every trike painted white/
to represent a lost life/
R-I-P to every gun that my community glorified/
and kids thought it was cool/
to make the innocent a shook one/
R-I-P to all the dumb ones/
R-I-P to all my unborn sons/
R-I-P to the one I had to take a deep breath on/
October 2 at 11:23am · Delete
 

Keisha

Rest in peace…to the one who pulled his piece to take another son…rest in peace to the one that was too stunned to run…rest in peace to the mother that's dying in grief…rest in peace crime…we need relief….God grant us peace that is still…release that steel from the one quick to kill…
October 2 at 11:31am · Delete
 

Magniff

Sit back with a sad face..this world such a bad place/
Where u can go to school early but later on end up getting ya ass chased/
Thinking of all the others who have been killed over who's who/
But luckily their death wasnt aired over the news and YouTube/
We can say rest in peace but when u missing your peace how do u rest/
We can only hope for better and praise to lord for lives to be blessed/
So much stress and anger collided with danger is just a minor sore/
No one while in the act of thinks to realize what are we fighting for/
And r young r killing young it's looking dumb but it's been begun/
Shorty getting bullied and teased at school goes home and later found hung/
To much pressure for a youngster how do they cope/
Who teaches them to be strong mentally when surrounded by gangs and dope/
Do u believe in hope. Well u know they laughing at our kids/
Now we got some teenagers on trial ready to serve life bids/
Who made them think it was right to hurt and take life/
Why wasn't they parents making em come str8 home to read and write/
As a youngin I was victim to victor kept my head up and wouldn't quit/
So as a man I'm saying live and let live. I'm tired of this bullshiii/
October 2 at 12:14pm · Delete
 

Alexis Horton

COMMON- REMINDS ME…. THAT SONG TAKES ME BACK 2 OLD SCHOOL CHI, WHEN ALL PEOPLE DID WAS KICK IT!! THERE WAS VIOLENCE, BUT NO ONE FEARED FOR THEIR LIVES GOING 2 SCHOOL OR WORK. IT JUST WASN'T THAT BAD!
AND LET'S NOT FORGET MY FAVORITE… RETROSPECT FOR LIFE- COMMON! IT'S MAINLY ABOUT UNWANTED PREGNANCY AND ABORTION, BUT NONE THE LESS, IT'S ABOUT APPRECIATING LIFE! WE DON'T DO THAT ENOUGH THESE DAYS. DERRION, MAY YOUR SOULD FIND PEACE IN THE LORD!!! R.I.P.
October 2 at 12:33pm · Delete
 

Keisha

So true …I'm tired too cause I gets no rest when all I hear at night…is sirens racing to arrest…I detest all the violence…my brother got shoot 10 times… years ago …and there's still no silence…when it comes to the gun bang…shorties can't even read…and they wanna gang bang…representing something that can't even explain…… Read Morethrowing up signs….while blood continues to rain….
steady burying young folks…mothers steady in pain….we gain nothing but plots in the cemetery…it's a shame
October 2 at 12:33pm · Delete
 

iQ

Long live peace and love/
Long live hugs/
death to shrugs/
R-I-P to White Drugs/
Long live the wink/… Read More
and death to the sound of waist jewelry making the metal clink/
Long live long life/
…death to passing before your time/

Its all in the plan/
but my life gots to have a greater purpose/
When loves lost/
the plan of attack has won/
Each one grow one/
Teach one/
Preach to one/
Til every child under the sun/
knows their loved by at least one/

The movement will be televised/
broadcast remotely from every city's skyline/
and everybody's heartline/
and socially discussed remotely – better than not/

Teach love and practice it/
see anger and banish it/
See kids I fight for them/
Want peace..you've got to fight for it.
October 2 at 12:51pm · Delete
 

Magniff

Good job everybody
October 2 at 3:45pm · Delete

 

iQ

It aint over…it AINT OVER…uh uh uh uh…DJ…gimme some mo sounds in my headphones joe..uh..uh..uhhhh
October 2 at 3:49pm · Delete
 

iQ

Every kid want the Money cars clothes and hoes/
Lil girls seeing they mama dancin to stupid shit/
Lil Boys seeing their daddy's disrespect the same chicks/
I spoke about in the line above this/
… Read More
Fuck a Nicca please/
Generation please/
Our generation needs to shead some of this superficial shit and dead weight/
Now that's a Strip tease I wanna see/
For that I'll make it rain on you and me/
and the babies and auntie's.

Its cool to be tough these days/
tote a notebook/
Get a job and work with 2×4's/
Don't plot to steal the city's and neighbors tax paid 2×4's/
Toughen up your pencil sharpening skills/
Test that out/
See how successful feels/
and stay at the real Drake/
And know failure is OK/
It comes with every territory/
Any Given Day OK/
October 2 at 3:52pm · Delete
 

Keisha'Kitten' Isaacs

Ah turn up my headphone….turn up the headphones…I'm bout snap…ah ah turn up my headphones!
October 2 at 7:50pm · Delete
 

Keisha 'Kitten' Isaacs

Strip the streets of gun wars….get down to business…rally downtown for a petition the Lord….instead of gathering for financial gain…too caught up in the money game…when focusing on our children…is where the attention should remain….trying to bring other nations to your town…instead of bowling down your own lane….we've got bigger … Read Moreproblems to address….Can't even take care of your own home…but you expect God to bless yo mess…come on people prioritize…open up your eyes…and see…there's a need for restoration in our communities….and on that note I rest in peace
October 2 at 8:04pm · Delete
 

Sean Black

@ Chris that was hot! I don't have no lines tonight, but good luck too all……..:)
October 2 at 8:06pm · Delete
 

Sean Black

@ Keisha "KITTEN"……GOOD JOB!
October 2 at 8:07pm · Delete


iQ

@Sean..appreciate it bro….@all THis was definitely HOT. Thanks for adding your thoughts
October 3 at 12:37am · Delete

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